Thank you for writing it!! Sentences like "Her silver afro mullet crests across her head with curls that bounce like frosted bubbles of glycerine" make me want to slip into the sub-lucid pool of lizard visions, if you know what I mean! 😆 also I lovee the looping figure 8 infinity eternity vibe, I write about that a lot
I think the uneasy feeling I got from the first half of this story was bc of how my guts were filling in the blanks of what was not yet said (or never said). Uneasiness arose mostly from inside me into the story, and not the reverse. When it comes from inside, it's eerier, I think.
Chuckling away at the grimness my friend - HUNGRY PURPLE UNDERWEAR - just superb!
Have to say - the prompt words are pretty delicious arent they haha - you really nailed that - short pithy and disturbing. some of the imagery is to die for - the last paragraph is just "GNNNNNnnnnnnnn" sublime - not sure id feel up to a bit rumpuss with my kidneys hanging out
i was looking at the three tial fox one, but coudlnt grasp a story off of it….im going to look back over the others - but I got 2 christmassy ones to dream up yet…. and three other unfinished posts screaming at me from the back of my mind - really loved this story - last paragraph absolutely took ALL THE BISCUITS
sounds like you have a lot of biscuits in YOUR oven. Looking forward to one of the screamy back brain ones. Once you get one of those on the rails you'll be flyin through the moutain pass like a photon sled. Can't wait.
Well this was a little bit fabulous!
Thank you SM. Always aimin to fabulate. I appreciate you having a read.
A touch of the Irvine Welsh in there - dark, dirty and fun.
Very generous. And I will take it.
How to find what lines to quote, man? The descriptions are fantastic!
Oh hey thank you
Man some of these sentences!! Loved this piece
Thank you Elle! You made my day.
Thank you for writing it!! Sentences like "Her silver afro mullet crests across her head with curls that bounce like frosted bubbles of glycerine" make me want to slip into the sub-lucid pool of lizard visions, if you know what I mean! 😆 also I lovee the looping figure 8 infinity eternity vibe, I write about that a lot
Well you made my day twice now. Youre welcome
Nicely done!
Thank you Bradley!
I think the uneasy feeling I got from the first half of this story was bc of how my guts were filling in the blanks of what was not yet said (or never said). Uneasiness arose mostly from inside me into the story, and not the reverse. When it comes from inside, it's eerier, I think.
Thanks for sharing it :)
It's really quite lovely and good love all the word play and descriptions. Love that a babe stole his kidney.
Thank you Edith! This was a fun one as you suggested it might be.
Crazy good!
Crazy thankyooz flying at you
Chuckling away at the grimness my friend - HUNGRY PURPLE UNDERWEAR - just superb!
Have to say - the prompt words are pretty delicious arent they haha - you really nailed that - short pithy and disturbing. some of the imagery is to die for - the last paragraph is just "GNNNNNnnnnnnnn" sublime - not sure id feel up to a bit rumpuss with my kidneys hanging out
Don't knock it till you tried it, I guess. Thank you Nick. I almost went with another three words but these ones called me back.
i was looking at the three tial fox one, but coudlnt grasp a story off of it….im going to look back over the others - but I got 2 christmassy ones to dream up yet…. and three other unfinished posts screaming at me from the back of my mind - really loved this story - last paragraph absolutely took ALL THE BISCUITS
sounds like you have a lot of biscuits in YOUR oven. Looking forward to one of the screamy back brain ones. Once you get one of those on the rails you'll be flyin through the moutain pass like a photon sled. Can't wait.