What a wonderful, magical tale! Cheeky, so fey and tapped in to the unseen. Her sibling not believing, of course, and yet a little belief creeps in maybe. With the love.
I really liked this one, Jon. It gripped me right from the beginning. The innocence of the sister is juxtaposed beautifully with the protectiveness of the brother.
I was firmly of the lighter-than-air persuasion but now your cute charming Cheeky has kinda sorta started making me think that maybe floating away like a feather isn't absolutely the best thing? Damn her adorable hide...
Love the turn at the end, the last paragraph is pure gold. It's quite windy by me today, you got me thinking I'm apt to float away out there
rocks in pockets my friend
This is wonderful, especially that last line. Really captures a nostalgic feeling for me.
capturing feelings? Amazing. Thank you.
What a wonderful, magical tale! Cheeky, so fey and tapped in to the unseen. Her sibling not believing, of course, and yet a little belief creeps in maybe. With the love.
Thank you Liz! It was an idea that suddenly had a life of its own right away. Pleased you liked it.
Oof, that turned didn't it! Great work, Jon.
thank you Hana!
I really liked this one, Jon. It gripped me right from the beginning. The innocence of the sister is juxtaposed beautifully with the protectiveness of the brother.
Bravo :)
Thank you Michael. Appreciate you reading. I liked it too.
Lovely. And I agree with other commenters - the last line is so good.
Damn dude, this is great.
Had to cleanse my pallete after all that sinning last week
But now you'll need to sin again. The cycle must continue.
Aw, beautifully done, Jon T! Thank you for writing this!🩶
A thing about lightness and heavyness and now I'm not sure which team I'm on any more - to rock your rocks or to float away in the breeze?
what's that thing? Float like a flutter-bye and rock like a B ?
I was firmly of the lighter-than-air persuasion but now your cute charming Cheeky has kinda sorta started making me think that maybe floating away like a feather isn't absolutely the best thing? Damn her adorable hide...