I finally got around to reading all of your blackwater entries and I wish I hadn't waited so long. Your style of writing is hypnotic. You paint such beautiful, surreal scenes with your writing. The pace of the story is masterful, speeding up and slowing down at all the right parts. I lost count of how many times I had to look up words that you used that I had never heard before, leaving me astonished to say the least. Rikki is such a unique character, I love everything about your blackwater stories!
Another wonderful installment posted just when I was in need of quality and immersive entertainment. I really enjoy how you layered Ricki’s reality and brought me into the same sense of confusion/subtle emotional distress/discomfort. Absolutely worth the wait!
I finally got around to reading all of your blackwater entries and I wish I hadn't waited so long. Your style of writing is hypnotic. You paint such beautiful, surreal scenes with your writing. The pace of the story is masterful, speeding up and slowing down at all the right parts. I lost count of how many times I had to look up words that you used that I had never heard before, leaving me astonished to say the least. Rikki is such a unique character, I love everything about your blackwater stories!
Wow. Thank you so much Jeff! Its really just so satisfying to do. I feel like she is kind of just writing herself. Ricki take the wheel!
She is a definitely a force to be reckoned with!
Also. I make a lot of words up so ---derrrrp
I noticed, but you're r e a l l y good at it.
Great writing! Loved the interplay between the orchestra and the violence. Lol, violas.
Rrrrip
Absolutely loving the Bioshock vibes of Ricki's story.
Ooh hadnt thought about that but yes yes, i can feel it. Thank you!
Dang, my dude: you're doing such a good job with it that I totally thought it was on purpose, haha.
Another wonderful installment posted just when I was in need of quality and immersive entertainment. I really enjoy how you layered Ricki’s reality and brought me into the same sense of confusion/subtle emotional distress/discomfort. Absolutely worth the wait!
Amazing. I am so pleased it worked out for you so well! Thanks for the restack too 🙌