You guys, I'm in literal awe. I've tried this sort of "yes and" kind of writing with a partner before, but this... this is amazing! Uncomfortable, funny, HORRIFIC, and all with a momentum that...
I adore this. (that opening paragraph tells [and tells and tells] me everything about that character, it's fantastic. The ending is glorious and the audacity to punchline it with that music...)
I can tell it was blast. In most other's hands your character's voice would be wholly indulgent--but in yours it's masterfully done. Same for Sandalore. I had so much fun reading/listening
Man, getting dissolved on a first date is rrrooouuuggghhh. That's usually like a third date thing for me. This was fun and wild and slightly insane! Loved every second of it!
This is amazing. So so funny. The music, the narration- highly entertaining. Also educational- corpus cavernosum- now I know, as does my Google history.
I snort-laughed so many times. Insensitive, I know, but self control is not an upgrade I’ve paid for yet. This was so intensely uncomfortable and weird and wonderful. You two are so amazing 🤩
Fantastic bad first date story. Love the twist at the end.
You guys, I'm in literal awe. I've tried this sort of "yes and" kind of writing with a partner before, but this... this is amazing! Uncomfortable, funny, HORRIFIC, and all with a momentum that...
I adore this. (that opening paragraph tells [and tells and tells] me everything about that character, it's fantastic. The ending is glorious and the audacity to punchline it with that music...)
Basically: holy shit this is fan-fucking-tastic!
Thank you Fitz. It was so much fun to make this terrible thing come alive.
I can tell it was blast. In most other's hands your character's voice would be wholly indulgent--but in yours it's masterfully done. Same for Sandalore. I had so much fun reading/listening
Very, very kind, sir. Thank you again.
This is hilarious!
Its not NOT funny. Thank you
Whoa
Man, getting dissolved on a first date is rrrooouuuggghhh. That's usually like a third date thing for me. This was fun and wild and slightly insane! Loved every second of it!
Why’s everyone saying the ending was bad! I think they are very happy together!
easy for the puppetmaster to say!
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You're not wrong! My body is a constant source of stress for me. I guess it wouldn't be so bad to exist without it.
Whatcha doin later tonight, Bill?
🤣🤣🤣 I need my body tonight, unfortunately.
This is amazing. So so funny. The music, the narration- highly entertaining. Also educational- corpus cavernosum- now I know, as does my Google history.
If i can make you want to google something, my day is made 🧡
Hilarious!
I snort-laughed so many times. Insensitive, I know, but self control is not an upgrade I’ve paid for yet. This was so intensely uncomfortable and weird and wonderful. You two are so amazing 🤩
We were definitely going for snorts. Its the new currency.
We couldn’t ask for much more than the snort laugh.
I laughed, I cried, I wondered why this doesn't have more engagement, I became enraged, I assumed calm, I ate benzos, soon I must sleep.
Sweet dreams and thank you —
entirely bizarre and hilarious. I could not stop reading!
Thank you, Nick!