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Terrance Ó Domhnaill's avatar

Now I want to read the rest of the story. There is one, right?

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Jon T's avatar

Um ya of course there is. Yes yes

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Enigmatic and dreamlike, Jonnie-boy! Great stuff!

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Jon T's avatar

Thank you kind man about town.

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Terrance Ó Domhnaill's avatar

Your story is ready to listen to today. Thank you for letting me read it to the world.

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NJ Fiction's avatar

This was good! Don’t think humanity is far off relatively speaking from this being a thing for real

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Jon T's avatar

I dont think so either

Thank you

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Annie Hendrix's avatar

Love this! I have a similar but different idea in one of my WIPs called “body sculpt” must be in the zeitgeist!

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Jon T's avatar

Must be. Tell me more?

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Annie Hendrix's avatar

It’s part of a short story I wrote in 2021. In my version it’s part of the digital world rather than the physical. But very similar how the user shapes their physical appearance as if sculpting clay. There is an instance of mistaken identity. Body Sculpt isn’t the focus of the story, but a detail. Was struck by the similarity! I think I got the idea from FaceApp.

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Jon T's avatar

Ah thats very cool. Thank you!

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Sean Thomas McDonnell's avatar

Damn. This is awesome.

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Jon T's avatar

Thankya

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Michael Edward's avatar

Such a smart and futuristic idea!

Very cool :)

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

More, please!☺️

I’m trying to catch up on some reading… I’m just sooo slooow.🙄

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

A case of mistaken identity, or is it? If the adults change their appearance, who's to say a child can't?

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Jon T's avatar

Ooooh!

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Did I just give you an idea?

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Jon T's avatar

Ya mightve rabbit

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