I must add, I came home from a day dealing with bureaucracy and red tape to find this swirling on my feed. I listened to the audio so, my fiance could hear (a writer editor a person who studies writing theory, prose), I on the other hand, I'm in discovery like a slow burn. When I listened and read it, a film projected in my mind, 35 mm you know those theaters are scarce these days. The scene played and died with me, but in the end I felt inspired. It was quite lovely.
Happy this thing swirled in your direction. I love it when stories project like this. Flickering across synaptic gaps and lurching to life like a wind up monster. I am humbly flattered by your reactions. Thank you.
That was really fantastic! And it's such a great setting with all those huge, strangely hypnotic machines, too, which makes the last line, "Sleep well", all the more mysterious and intriguing. Very nicely done... 😎
What genre is this? Because I think it might be my favorite and I need to know how to find more stories like yours. Or better, just keep writing them so I have more to read! I loved this so much.
I must add, I came home from a day dealing with bureaucracy and red tape to find this swirling on my feed. I listened to the audio so, my fiance could hear (a writer editor a person who studies writing theory, prose), I on the other hand, I'm in discovery like a slow burn. When I listened and read it, a film projected in my mind, 35 mm you know those theaters are scarce these days. The scene played and died with me, but in the end I felt inspired. It was quite lovely.
Happy this thing swirled in your direction. I love it when stories project like this. Flickering across synaptic gaps and lurching to life like a wind up monster. I am humbly flattered by your reactions. Thank you.
That was really fantastic! And it's such a great setting with all those huge, strangely hypnotic machines, too, which makes the last line, "Sleep well", all the more mysterious and intriguing. Very nicely done... 😎
Thank you Chris. I love laundromats. You’re right, they are mysterious places
Listening to this was a treat. A weird, wonderful treat. The humor and pathos and just a little foreboding worked so well.
Ooh thank you. If i achieved pathos and humor, youve made my day.
This is wonderful! I've done my time (interminable boredom and weird anxiety) in laundromats without anything this magical happening. And now it has!
Thank you Liz. Next time check the traps.
What genre is this? Because I think it might be my favorite and I need to know how to find more stories like yours. Or better, just keep writing them so I have more to read! I loved this so much.
I will keep em coming. Thank you for reading. It makes me skip around a little when I walk.