What genre is this? Because I think it might be my favorite and I need to know how to find more stories like yours. Or better, just keep writing them so I have more to read! I loved this so much.
Wow. Such a beautiful, strange story. The way you wrote their unspoken dialogue was so exquisite. The smells, the sounds and the feltyness of the whole thing. Incredible piece.
I must add, I came home from a day dealing with bureaucracy and red tape to find this swirling on my feed. I listened to the audio so, my fiance could hear (a writer editor a person who studies writing theory, prose), I on the other hand, I'm in discovery like a slow burn. When I listened and read it, a film projected in my mind, 35 mm you know those theaters are scarce these days. The scene played and died with me, but in the end I felt inspired. It was quite lovely.
Happy this thing swirled in your direction. I love it when stories project like this. Flickering across synaptic gaps and lurching to life like a wind up monster. I am humbly flattered by your reactions. Thank you.
That was really fantastic! And it's such a great setting with all those huge, strangely hypnotic machines, too, which makes the last line, "Sleep well", all the more mysterious and intriguing. Very nicely done... 😎
What genre is this? Because I think it might be my favorite and I need to know how to find more stories like yours. Or better, just keep writing them so I have more to read! I loved this so much.
I will keep em coming. Thank you for reading. It makes me skip around a little when I walk.
You already know I love absurdist/surreal stories, Jon, but this was a master class.
Beautiful done as always!
Oh thank you so much. I’m really happy you enjoyed it.
One of the most refreshing pieces I've read in a while. i felt literal shock when he handed over the PJs.
Me too. I didnt see it coming until it was right in front of me. Thank you Will
This has to be one of the most creative piece I've seen in a long time.
Wow. Thank you Bill. It was fun to start writing it and figure out where it was going to go. Thank you very much for commenting and reading!
Such a strange and interesting story, Jon. Loved it :)
Thank you for reading and commenting Michael. Appreciate your mindballs on the work.
Wow. Such a beautiful, strange story. The way you wrote their unspoken dialogue was so exquisite. The smells, the sounds and the feltyness of the whole thing. Incredible piece.
Thank you EJ. I am so pleased you liked it.
I must add, I came home from a day dealing with bureaucracy and red tape to find this swirling on my feed. I listened to the audio so, my fiance could hear (a writer editor a person who studies writing theory, prose), I on the other hand, I'm in discovery like a slow burn. When I listened and read it, a film projected in my mind, 35 mm you know those theaters are scarce these days. The scene played and died with me, but in the end I felt inspired. It was quite lovely.
Happy this thing swirled in your direction. I love it when stories project like this. Flickering across synaptic gaps and lurching to life like a wind up monster. I am humbly flattered by your reactions. Thank you.
That was really fantastic! And it's such a great setting with all those huge, strangely hypnotic machines, too, which makes the last line, "Sleep well", all the more mysterious and intriguing. Very nicely done... 😎
Thank you Chris. I love laundromats. You’re right, they are mysterious places
Listening to this was a treat. A weird, wonderful treat. The humor and pathos and just a little foreboding worked so well.
Ooh thank you. If i achieved pathos and humor, youve made my day.
This is wonderful! I've done my time (interminable boredom and weird anxiety) in laundromats without anything this magical happening. And now it has!
Thank you Liz. Next time check the traps.