“ In clumps of broken speech and incomplete thoughts, Darren tried to explain, "I didn't see—until it was too late. So slippery—I was moving too fast. Something was there for a sec, and then—must've slipped—I pumped the brakes—skidded over top. So fucked up, jeez—could hear crunches and a popping sound."
— I really liked this bit of dialogue, it was very true to life.
Bad juju, great story!
Thanks Liz. Au jus jus
Nice premise and execution, Jon.
Protein is an essential micronutrient for survival.
You would know. Thank you Bradley.
A very gripping story, Jon.
“ In clumps of broken speech and incomplete thoughts, Darren tried to explain, "I didn't see—until it was too late. So slippery—I was moving too fast. Something was there for a sec, and then—must've slipped—I pumped the brakes—skidded over top. So fucked up, jeez—could hear crunches and a popping sound."
— I really liked this bit of dialogue, it was very true to life.
Thank you Michael. Yes, it’s the one part in the story i fussed about a fair bit. I am happy it came across that way