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The world you have created is confronting in its vividness. It’s also somewhat uncanny in that I feel like there is this way in which it could be possible.

Very much enjoying it Jon :)

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Thank you again Michael. I tried to split the difference between fantastic and plausible. Happy to hear it achieves this to some degree with you.

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How many parts are left of this, Jon? I don't want it to end. So good!

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I think another four sections. Its 16,000 + words. I am happy youre enjoying it !

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Gosh this all just feels like a song does as it unravels in my mind. Beautifully done. Can't wait to read the next part

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